https://read.bookcreator.com/GJY4zjDKvkfeBCj3YsATByhouxE3/d1lOr-UNSGizi6CZyS6yvQ
this is the book i have made click the link to see thank you
Welcome to my blog, I'm in Ruma Rima, a Year 5-8 class at Paparoa Range School in Dobson, near Greymouth. My teacher is Miss Devlin.
Tuesday, 29 August 2017
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the lorax
this week room five have been createing the next bit of the lorax here is the link https://docs.google.com/document/d/1Ke_4gmrStDFVp0sm2Id_F...
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https://read.bookcreator.com/GJY4zjDKvkfeBCj3YsATByhouxE3/d1lOr-UNSGizi6CZyS6yvQ this is the book i have made click the link to see thank ...
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I am learning to make my writing more interesting for the reader. I know I will be able to do this when I add more detail, interesting words...
I like you have a big bold title and you have pictures to make it more interesting.To improve you could make you writing a different color so we can see it better.At the end of the book make it capitals. don't put what it is about at the end of the story and your first and last name at the end of the story needs capitals.The name of a a month needs a capital letter at the start
ReplyDeleteI like you have a big bold title and you have pictures to make it more interesting.To improve you could make you writing a different color so we can see it better.At the end of the book make it capitals. don't put what it is about at the end of the story and your first and last name at the end of the story needs capitals.The name of a a month needs a capital letter at the start
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