I am learning to add more detail to my writing to make it more interesting for the reader.
Nelson Creek
At Nelson Creek I heard the running water, the cicadas and birds.
I smelt the aroma coming
form some of the bbq's.
I heard the sound of the stones crushing as I walked on them and felt the silky sand
sinking as I stood in the wind as it howled hooo.
The water swished about while the sticks were snapped as I walked along the edge of the
water.
I stopped, I listened, I heard the bridge creaking.
Nelson Creek my favourite
place.
