Tuesday 29 August 2017

book

https://read.bookcreator.com/GJY4zjDKvkfeBCj3YsATByhouxE3/d1lOr-UNSGizi6CZyS6yvQ

this is the book i have made click the link to see thank you

2 comments:

  1. I like you have a big bold title and you have pictures to make it more interesting.To improve you could make you writing a different color so we can see it better.At the end of the book make it capitals. don't put what it is about at the end of the story and your first and last name at the end of the story needs capitals.The name of a a month needs a capital letter at the start

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  2. I like you have a big bold title and you have pictures to make it more interesting.To improve you could make you writing a different color so we can see it better.At the end of the book make it capitals. don't put what it is about at the end of the story and your first and last name at the end of the story needs capitals.The name of a a month needs a capital letter at the start

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