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Hi, my name is Simeon. I'm 10 years old and I go to Paparoa Range School. I am a year 5 and I'm  in room 4 and my teachers name is Mrs McGeever.  

I like writing at school because I like going on the computer and I like being on the computer. My other favourite subject is reading because sometimes we read on the computer my favourite foods are KFC, pizza and McDonald's.

At school I have a lot of fun, only sometimes I don't have fun when it is maths. My favourite animal is a cat  because I have a cat at my house. Its name is Moonshine. We named  it Moonshine because she shines like the moon. I like going camping with my family because I like going to Lake Brunner and we camp at Nelson Creek.  This is the first place we camped.

My Favourite Place

I am learning to add more detail to my writing to make it more interesting for the reader.

  

Nelson Creek

At Nelson Creek I heard the running water, the cicadas and birds. 

I smelt the aroma coming form some of  the bbq's. 

I heard the sound of the stones crushing as I walked on them and felt the silky sand sinking as I stood in the wind as it howled hooo. 

The water swished about while the sticks were snapped as I walked along the edge of the water. 

I stopped, I listened, I heard the bridge creaking. 

Nelson Creek my favourite place.      

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